From:Shinya Haru

I loved the idea of Yeojin going to a bar! But the typesetting is a bit messy because the dialogue is mixed in with the paragraphs Just me opinion but good story none the less!!

I totally get what you mean. It was one of my first fics ever, so it is quite messy, sadly. Sorry about that. I will try to edit it when I get a little more time.